-learn about the illegal Ivory trade and Africa's Elefants
http://education.nationalgeographic.com/education/battle-for-elephants/?ar_a=1
http://newswatch.nationalgeographic.com/blog/a-voice-for-elephants/
At the try of
being the voice to the elephants the National Geographic team made a film about
"Battle for the Elephants" were it exposes the viewers into seeing
the brutal slaugthers of the African elephants for their precious tusks fueled
by China's great demand for ivory. The film becomes a voice to these historic
and majestic land animals that today faces market forces driving the value of
its tusks to levels once reserved for gold. Through a blog managed by the
journalists Bryan Christy and Aidan Hartley takes the viewers and readers of
the National Geographic into examining the supply and demans for ivories in the
chinese trade market. Traveling to China with Christy it is shown how the
thriving ivory market is being proceeded and the ancient chinese tradition of
ivory carving. While Hartley makes a journey to Africa where he gains a rare
permission to enter the ivory stockpiles and goes undercover to expose the
criminal ivory trade network. While Hartley visited the warehouses and said
,"You can smell it, it's almost like dried blood. There is smell of death
in here. All these are confiscated trophies." and Aidan meets with Khamis
Kagasheki, minister of natural resources in Tanzania, which stores the world’s
largest stockpile of elephant tusks in the world. Unlike Kenya Tanzania which
is known to be one of the world's poorest countries disagrees with burning the
tusks arguing that the money from sales could support conversation efforts.
Aidan expresses his idea by stating, " An official told us that
if an international agency were to buy the tusks with the intention of burning
them, they would eagerly sell them. But who would support such an idea?"
For
being a desperately poor country many in Tanzania would like to sell the ivory
inside the warehouse, but others worry that another sale would make the demand
for this material higher and would lead into more poaching. Most experts believe that the world's
leading ivory consumer is China. According to Bryan christy the underground
market is having a blast , CITES announced that about 25,000 elephants were
killed in Africa last year, in Tanzania alone,poachers kill 30 elephants per
day and the International Fund for Animal Welfare estimates that 84 percents of
the ivory sold to China is illegal.One thing is left clear, maybe the last battle for the elephants
are being fought now.
These several authors does not only represent the National Geographic channel , but also battles for the elephant's rights and lives. Hartley for example did the impossible of entering a ivory warehouse in order to be able to report what kind of crimes happens upon the African Elephants the author uses drastic vocabulary to express the world's concern on these elephants. The author is direct and clear uses examples and his own experience to express the unsaid and unknown, giving out percise information . His intention is to gather people attention to make a louder voice for these elephants making everyone to exposed to this elephants crises instead of leaving them ignorant to such situations.
Comma Misuse- "At the try of being the voice to the elephants the National Geographic team made a film about "Battle for the Elephants" were it exposes the viewers into seeing the brutal slaugthers of the African elephants for their precious tusks fueled by China's great demand for ivory." This becomes a run-on sentence if you don't have commas in their. (correct place of commas)
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