Josh Voorhees wrote an article on the afternoon of March 11, about the new proposal the supreme court carried out. It states that any restaurant in New York City, can not sell drinks larger then the 16-ounce limit. Voorhees states though, that only non-diet sodas and energy drinks apply to this rule, fruit juices, milk-based drinks, or alcoholic beverages where not included. He also states, that just like every other "law," there is always a loophole. You can still get your super sized drinks at 7-eleven and many other convenience stories. Voorhees ends his article saying that the mayor's office has yet to appeal in the ruling.
In this article Voorhees uses a lot of allusions, but not straight, he talks about the famous New York City, and the new ruling that it is going through. He also talks about the mayor and how he his office has to appeal. His diction is a little weak throughout the article. He doesn't have a straight thesis and has weak argument, he just states what the new law the supreme court is passing, and doesn't show any emotions, maybe he does not live in New York so its not applicable to him. Voorhees article is very short, but he does offer a solution; to those that need that extra large drink, or a loophole that allows you to have your drink in any size you want.
here again is a comma splices hehe and some fragments, but overall was this article really relevant to you? and both of your blogs you mentioned the same devices, try using other devices to analyse the authors purpose (: good job
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