10. The Disconcerting Brilliance of the iPhone 5

http://www.slate.com/articles/technology/technology/2012/09/iphone_5_review_apple_s_smartphone_is_the_best_yet_but_do_you_really_need_one_.html

The Slate staff writer Will Oremus wrote on Septemper 21st about the IPhone 5 and informing the readers to think a little more about weather they really do need the IPhone 5. He begins his introduction with a simple yet very powerful paragraph, stating that people know a days think they can't live without these gadgets, but it isn't true. Oremus continues his essay explaining how many people would stand in line for an hour just to touch the IPhone 5. He goes on to inform the readers very clear and modest that even though there are many Android phones out there that are really fast, the IPhone 5 surpasses them in all ways. He explain in a exhilarating tone that for those who have never had phones like these its very inspiring and amazing to carry the whole world in your pocket, but he says its very disconcerting because its a lot to carry. Oremus shows that he along with may other people get distracted with normal phones, imagine with the IPhone, he also adds to his sentence to create a more vivid and powerful remark, that sometimes the waiting to upload something on other cellphones was the excuse to enjoy the view, which with the new and improved IPhone 5 doesn't allow people to do that, as states before in earlier paragraphs. Oremus ends his essay with a very stalwart last sentence stating "The iPhone 5 is merely the finest exemplar yet of the phone that can do it all—except for all the things in life that you really need to do."

Oremus writes this essay to enlighten readers about how the IPhone 5 i the newest and most improved phone of the year. He also informs us, that the there is no other cellphones like it, but this may be a problem to everyone, because we stop paying attention to things the IPhone can't give us. He also uses this essay to expose the importance that IPone has on people and the want for more. He wraps the whole essay up in one sentence when he says "The iPhone 5 is merely the finest exemplar yet of the phone that can do it all—except for all the things in life that you really need to do."