http://www.slate.com/articles/arts/television/2011/09/the_x_factor.html
Troy Patterson writes an article on September 22, 2011; informing readers about The X Factor. He starts his article, by explaining the competition that American Idol will have from now on; "The heir to American Idol arrives." He says that now, the X Factor presented "the biggest prize un the history of television." Patterson introduces his readers to the judges who will be critiquing the future stars; including main judge Simon Cowell. Patterson goes on to show many people who have auditioned for the X Factor, and how many of them will make it to the last round. He finalizes his article explaining that many times there are auditions who make people even vomit, but taking that out most are like a melody to your ears.
In this article Patterson tries to promote The X Factor to be something very enthusiastic to all people who love TV shows that portray reality. His diction throughout the article is very strong; they way he speaks of the TV show, it seams that he has watched it before and may even be a huge fan. He explains and emphasizes, that just like another reality show, there are some disappointing moments in the show, but it's part of the experience. Patterson Uses may examples to prove his point, on how "any one who is anyone," should watch the show. He chose a picture with two girls in the back, that portrays a little bit how the show is, and what its for. He has as caption of the picture, "Singers compete for $5 million on X Factor," showing that they show is not only entertaining but showing how people go there to win, its a competition.
Maybe try to include more information or details on the judges or the show itself (for people who have no idea). Rhetorical devices such as diction and emphasis. Could include author's purpose, tone, and main idea.
ReplyDeletegood analysis definitely tries to portrait promote someting enthusiastic. but including the tone would not be a bad ideaa
ReplyDeletenice work in portraying the fact that x factor tries to promote a enthusiastice program to the people, but inlcuding the tone would not be a bad idea
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