On November 2nd, 2010, Dave Itzvoff wrote an article talking about the unfortunate circumstances the singer and actress, Demi Lovato, found herself in. He begins by stating all the works she has done in her carrear including movies, albums and tv shows. Dave continues by presenting the explanation from her representatives as to why Ms. Lovato canceled the remaining dates of her tour and admitted herself into a treatment center, they announced that she was seeking professional help to personal and physical struggles and they also asked the media to respect her decisions and to respect her privacy.
Since there was so specific reasons to the incidents Dave closes the article with a quote from Demi that demonstrated that she was scared because of all the pressure she was under. The write's purpose in writing this article was to notify the readers about the struggles in Demi's personal life and also to demonstrate the disadvantages of fame and effects of pressure in people's life.
-Don't need specific date, unless it's drastically important in the article.
ReplyDelete-"all the works she has done"
*- grammar and word choice issues
-Never refer to the author by first name only, call him Itzvoff, never Dave.
-You need to choose from a more academic source.
-Also, make sure to include more analysis of language, devices etc., that the author used.