Kasia Baldegg, associate director at The Atlantic, wrote this article on the brief history of sliced bread. She begins by attributing the invention of the bread slicing machine to Otto Rohwedder, whom after several failed attempts at selling his machine was finally able to sell it to The Chillicothe Baking Company. She continues her article by saying how sliced bread was an instant hit and how the local newspaper reported it on the first page. She also mentions how the U.S. banned sliced bread in 1943, motivated to conserve resources for the war.
The authors purpose in this article is to inform the audience about the brief history of sliced bread, and how people were amazed at this new invention when today it is just another item at the table.
-There is no number before the title. You need to put a 1. if this is your first post, and 2. if it's your second. If you don't from now on you won't receive credit.
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-you need far more of an analysis of the article. The second paragraph is what you need to focus on, and what you have now wouldn't be considered even a paragraph. From now on you need to write more on the purpose/tone/devices that the author used in the article.
-This post would receive a 1/4 score if I was grading it. So, next time make sure to do what I said (: