Although facebook is known for uniting people workwide and is complemented for being user friendly, seem like they are still at work on how to help people connect to each other comfortably without much problem which is why Mark Zuckerberg, the co-founder and chief executive of Facebook announced that in a while facebook will be launching a new tool that will support the people to have easy access to past posts and photos in the midst of such chaos and promises it will facilitate the millions users life in persuing on what interests them online.
This article can make to audience either very excited or leave them in a pondering state. Technology has been advancing us very fast and by updating and giving tools to have a easier access to a large amount of imformation can be somewhat negative. But this article also accesse us to visuals to look forward to this tool and uses comparison to compare how hard it is for us to find old posts and pictures and various things that interests us and how it will be good not to go through such an hard work to find what interests you the most
You skipped #21 in your numbering :-)
ReplyDeleteMake sure you are using spell check and good grammar and writing. The first paragraph is a huge run-on sentence.
How are they arguing or persuading you to change?