http://www.nytimes.com/2013/02/16/opinion/getting-obamas-preschool-education-plan-right.html?hp
On February
15th, an article was published on The New York Times regarding
President Obama’s plan to invest on and improve preschool education. The author
introduces the topic by saying how Obama’s project has received a lot of
criticism from the Republicans. He then
cites the problems with strategies that try to improve preschool education such
as the effectiveness of the project and the costs of these programs. He also
says what these programs should look like by explaining the effectiveness of a
previous project conducted in the 1960s. After that, the author says what Obama
has done to start this initiative, giving details on the program such as its
range (“4-year-olds from families at or below 200 percent of the poverty level”)
and the source of funds (“cost-sharing partnership with the states”). The
author seems to support the president’s project by emphasizing on its upsides
and criticizing those who object right out of the gate to this program.
The author’s
purpose was to inform his readers and persuade them to agree with his belief
that the project to invest on preschool education is something worth
supporting. He creates some common ground with people who disagree with the
program by talking about the difficulties in designing an effective education
plan and compares them to one that worked really well in the past. He provides
the readers with information regarding the current progress in the issue and details
about the project itself. However, he does not assure the credibility of his
sources, but only says “officials have said”, “preschool researchers say”, “Countless
studies have found”. In order to persuade a stronger audience, more statistics
and their origins would be necessary.
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