http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/business-22727373
When it comes to unemployment in the area of Europe, the situation really heats up. as the unemployment reached it's new record in April it seems as if every month becames a new record of the high umemploment rate. Bringing out numerous concerns the author writes about how serious these numbers are becoming and how they are effect the many lives of the european countries who are in great crisis in the moment. Greece and Spain are the two mais affected countries with 25 % above rate on unemploments and Austria has the lowest unemployment which can in a blink of an high rise up. "We do not see a stabilisation in unemployment before the middle of next year," said Frederik Ducrozet, an economist at Credit Agricole in Paris. "The picture in France is still deteriorating." bringing out serious concerns to the eurozone.
The author does a well done job bringing out the concern to the audience throught tone and method of writing, emphasizing the diction with intense words to bring out such emotions. most importantly the author states emphasizing quotes on authorities of europe , making the situation worse and he pick out the quotes that shows how the authorities were't ready for this crisis and how they are in conflict in resolve this issue, making the situation much more dramatic. By using the graph the author gave a clear over image of how critical this situation is turning out to be.
Friday, May 31, 2013
Thursday, May 30, 2013
39. Report: 1 in 5 public schools classified as “high-poverty”
http://www.salon.com/2013/05/30/report_1_in_5_public_schools_classified_as_high_poverty/
In Katie McDonough's article,"Report: 1 in 5 public schools classified as 'high-poverty'," informs that 1 in 5 public schools are in extreme poverty. The school does not have enough financial support which are affecting the education of the students. These students are receiving a low-standard of education and there has been a study which shows that "unemployment among men and women without a high school degree is much greater than statistics for those with at least a bachelors degree." When these men and women enter the real world, they don't have any experience or knowledge which will help them survive. MrDonough reveal the thoughts of the executive director of a school which says that they don't have the resourced they wish they had and can't do anything to help these schools in high poverty. She ends her article by revealing the unemployment rate.
The purpose of the author to write this article was to inform people about these tragic case. As the title mentions, this article is a report made by the author to his audience which are mostly the authorities and people interest the the development of a better United States. McDonough uses her sources well by referring to an executive director, to actual school, and to statistics. All of the examples add credibility to her article making it more reliable. Her tone is formal and serious, meaning that people must take action and help these students which are in need of a better education, so that they may have a brighter future. McDonough is really effective throughout her article, making the reader understand the importance of education and the funds.
In Katie McDonough's article,"Report: 1 in 5 public schools classified as 'high-poverty'," informs that 1 in 5 public schools are in extreme poverty. The school does not have enough financial support which are affecting the education of the students. These students are receiving a low-standard of education and there has been a study which shows that "unemployment among men and women without a high school degree is much greater than statistics for those with at least a bachelors degree." When these men and women enter the real world, they don't have any experience or knowledge which will help them survive. MrDonough reveal the thoughts of the executive director of a school which says that they don't have the resourced they wish they had and can't do anything to help these schools in high poverty. She ends her article by revealing the unemployment rate.
The purpose of the author to write this article was to inform people about these tragic case. As the title mentions, this article is a report made by the author to his audience which are mostly the authorities and people interest the the development of a better United States. McDonough uses her sources well by referring to an executive director, to actual school, and to statistics. All of the examples add credibility to her article making it more reliable. Her tone is formal and serious, meaning that people must take action and help these students which are in need of a better education, so that they may have a brighter future. McDonough is really effective throughout her article, making the reader understand the importance of education and the funds.
39. Let's Be Clear: Establishing a 'No-Fly Zone' Is an Act of War
http://www.theatlantic.com/politics/archive/2013/05/lets-be-clear-establishing-a-no-fly-zone-is-an-act-of-war/276319/
On May 29th, Conor Friedersdorf
wrote for The Atlantic about the “no-fly zone” policy adopted by the United
States towards the war in Syria. Friedersdorf is firm in his conviction that
this term is the total opposite of what the U.S. has actually done. He believes
that it is a euphemism for declaring war against Syria. After introducing the
topic, Friedersdorf describes and quotes authors and politicians to support his
idea that the “no-fly zone” actually means sending weapons to contain and
confront the Syrian forces.
The author’s purpose in
writing this article is to inform and persuade his audience not to fall for
what appears to be true about the “no-fly zone”. His tone is satirical and
mocking, since he uses irony to make fun of the U.S. government’s attempt to
use the euphemism, especially in the last sentence. He is more informal than
formal because of the use of expressions, contractions, first person. Most of
the times in the article, the use of short paragraphs are meant to emphasize on
an idea and the long paragraphs expand on those ideas. The author is not really
effective to persuade those who do not agree with him since he does not use
solid evidence to support his idea about the U.S. waging war against Syria.
Sunday, May 26, 2013
38. French Soldier Stabbed in the Throat While on Patrol Outside Paris
http://www.slate.com/blogs/the_slatest/2013/05/25/french_soldier_stabbed_in_the_throat_outside_paris.html
Daniel Politi wrote on May 25th, about an attack on a French soldier on patrol near the "western outskirts of Paris." The report stated information about the victim and where he was when the attack happened. The victim was transported to a hospital where he was under treatment, but the incident did not keep the French citizens assured of safety. Politi quoted the Washington Post by saying it "sent a shudder through the French capital." The second paragraph of the article talked more about the criminal, what he was wearing and how he disappeared from the scene. Although the identity and the reason behind the assult was unknown, President Francois Hollande assured the journalists the police were investigating everything.
Politi's purpose in writing this article was to inform everyone, particularly the French people, about the assult. His report about the incident was short, yet contained a lot of information about the issue. This was successfully achieved through the author's objective words to describe the situation. In addition, the short and coherent syntax contributed to the informative approach of the article because it directly stated the facts and the information following each idea had a logical flow that allowed the reader to understand what was going on. Throughout the article, Politi referenced the Washington Post, and Reuters, both of which would be considered as highly respected and credible sources to support his arguments. Furthermore, he alluded to a recent murder of a London soldier and quoted President Francois Hollande's words in order to provide true facts.
38. Iraq’s Sectarian Violence: Bombings Plunge Country Into Deadly Spiral
Bombings are chaotic and leave great destruction. Monday
in Basra, a mostly Shi’ite city 420 km from Baghdad, a bomb went off at a
sandwich kiosk. It was one of two in the city and many more were in Iraq. Reports
say that dozens of bombs went off in markets, mosques, and bus station. There
have been 95 deaths and over 250 wounded. Yet, these bombings are only the most
recent in a bloody time in Iraq. While it is unknown who is responsible for the
bombings, some believe that domestic and political rifts are the first cause.
The Shi’ite majority has conflicts with the Sunni minority. Stephen Wicken who works for the Institute for the Study of
War in Washington, D.C. says, “You often hear people saying, Is it 2006 again…Other
people are saying, No, it’s 2003 again, which is probably closer to the mark,
actually, in terms of security forces acting as bullet magnets in the way that
coalition forces did a decade ago.” This spring has proven to be a bloody one
for the nation and there is little optimism. The future looks very grim
overall. Wiken said, “Any situation in which there is a high level of tension
and where there are people pointing weapons at each other, it’s a magnet to
groups like al-Qaeda to come in and destabilize things or provoke people to go
over the edge.”
Nate Rawlings starts with a personal story about when he
witnessed the carnage from a bombing. His story was sad and gives a glimpse on
the tragedies. The story also establishes credibility because he was there and
has experience in the country as well as situation. Rawlings uses tallies from
the Associated Press along with a few other findings. A bit of past information
is given to remind the reader of past evens.
38. Thousands of Bridges Across the United States Are at Risk of Collapse
http://www.slate.com/blogs/the_slatest/2013/05/26/thousands_of_bridges_across_u_s_are_at_risk_of_collapse.html
In Daniel Politi's article, "Thousands of Bridges Across the United States Are at Risk of Collapse," he reveals that many bridges across the country are collapsing after one accident. He starts out his article by showing a recent accident, which resulted in a collapsed bridge. Politi says the structure of the bridges are too weak and don't have enough protections. State officials state that the bridges are being inspected. However, they are still at risk of collapsing and millions of drivers cross these bridges without knowing that. Politi ends his article with a quote from the chairman of the NAtional Transportation Safety Board encouraging people to notice this problem.
The author's purpose in writing this article is to warn people about the collapsing bridges across the country. The audience of this article are Americans, since this problem is occurring in the USA and the victims are those who live there. Politi does a good job in referring to credible authorities such as the chairman of the National Transportation Safety Board. He also uses logos and pathos to support his point. Politi writes about the bridges collapsing which is a true fact that most people already know. His tone is serious, which means that action must be taken soon. Politi does a good job in informing people and letting people realize the significance of knowing this problem which can hurt many people.
In Daniel Politi's article, "Thousands of Bridges Across the United States Are at Risk of Collapse," he reveals that many bridges across the country are collapsing after one accident. He starts out his article by showing a recent accident, which resulted in a collapsed bridge. Politi says the structure of the bridges are too weak and don't have enough protections. State officials state that the bridges are being inspected. However, they are still at risk of collapsing and millions of drivers cross these bridges without knowing that. Politi ends his article with a quote from the chairman of the NAtional Transportation Safety Board encouraging people to notice this problem.
The author's purpose in writing this article is to warn people about the collapsing bridges across the country. The audience of this article are Americans, since this problem is occurring in the USA and the victims are those who live there. Politi does a good job in referring to credible authorities such as the chairman of the National Transportation Safety Board. He also uses logos and pathos to support his point. Politi writes about the bridges collapsing which is a true fact that most people already know. His tone is serious, which means that action must be taken soon. Politi does a good job in informing people and letting people realize the significance of knowing this problem which can hurt many people.
37. Obama surveys tornado damage
http://www.salon.com/2013/05/26/obama_surveys_tornado_damage/
In Nedra Pickler's article, "Obama surveys tornado damage," she reveals the President's actions toward the tornado which hit Oklahoma. She starts out the article by stating the number of death and Obama;s visit "to survey damage" of the tornado. Pickler also talks about Oklahoma's governor Mary Fallin's thoughts about this tornado. Fallin reveals that she wishes that the financial help from the government could be given faster, so that the victims could be helped. Obama said that the whole country will support them through their time of need. The President will be going to the suburbs of Moore to survey the damage of the tornado. There were many deaths, especially children, which is a very sad news. Fallin stated that most schools have been encouraged to have a safety room for these kind of unfortunate cases. Pickler ends her article by quoting Fallin that said that looking at the debris and damage of the tornado, 24 death is really little.
The author's purpose of the article is to inform people about the tornado that happened in Oklahoma and reveal how the President is taking action toward this case. She refers to the President and the governor of Oklahoma, which makes her article more reliable, since she alluded to them. Pickler shows statistics about the damage. Her diction is very formal and direct. Her tone is very serious. She uses many quotes to reveal the circumstances of Oklahoma. Pickler's readers are people who wants to know what is happening after the tornado and wants to know how the government will take action.
In Nedra Pickler's article, "Obama surveys tornado damage," she reveals the President's actions toward the tornado which hit Oklahoma. She starts out the article by stating the number of death and Obama;s visit "to survey damage" of the tornado. Pickler also talks about Oklahoma's governor Mary Fallin's thoughts about this tornado. Fallin reveals that she wishes that the financial help from the government could be given faster, so that the victims could be helped. Obama said that the whole country will support them through their time of need. The President will be going to the suburbs of Moore to survey the damage of the tornado. There were many deaths, especially children, which is a very sad news. Fallin stated that most schools have been encouraged to have a safety room for these kind of unfortunate cases. Pickler ends her article by quoting Fallin that said that looking at the debris and damage of the tornado, 24 death is really little.
The author's purpose of the article is to inform people about the tornado that happened in Oklahoma and reveal how the President is taking action toward this case. She refers to the President and the governor of Oklahoma, which makes her article more reliable, since she alluded to them. Pickler shows statistics about the damage. Her diction is very formal and direct. Her tone is very serious. She uses many quotes to reveal the circumstances of Oklahoma. Pickler's readers are people who wants to know what is happening after the tornado and wants to know how the government will take action.
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